Punish and reward me
like the dog you cannot
truly own.
I serve and deliver
hungry for seconds,
those gaps in time
that convince the
good side that there
is something worthy
of this love.
Devouring those seconds
between thought and action
where penetration meets
maximum insertion.
like the dog you cannot
truly own.
I serve and deliver
hungry for seconds,
those gaps in time
that convince the
good side that there
is something worthy
of this love.
Devouring those seconds
between thought and action
where penetration meets
maximum insertion.
22 Comments:
cool wordsmithing... haha i like that term
wonderful flow and that feeling, such helplessness in it.
great poem. glad to see a new post :)
where penetration meets
maximum insertion.
WELCOME BACK!! ... wow! I can't stop reading that line *crinkles eyebrows* I'm not even going to tell you how I interpreted this one, my mind bends at times, D!
j
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Punish and reward me
like the dog you cannot
truly own.
excellent poem DeeM, good to see you back!
just in case you didn't know, you've been dearly missed around here. so good to read your poems again!
Wow we are on the circle in search of love
we can not own love
it own us as it seems...
Nasra
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well the above me...if you happen to wonder who is Nasra
Funny, I was going to comment on the same line as Jaxe, but he has pointed it out. I too am glad to see you back.
Deem's a dork! She's just basically a spam magnet. *blink* Uh oh, does that make us SPAM?
*cries*
<3
j
If I'm a dork the that makes you dorks too. Birds of a feather...
At least I know nothing about D&D. ;)
Mmmm.... big fat hunky chunks of spam 'meat'. Who's hungry?
raw poetry.
*hands DeeM more spam*
"where penetration meets maximum insertion" Have at it with the spam!
(... and my L9 Chaotic Lawful Warrior/Rogue can kill you with ONE backstab, assuming you fail your saving throw) Dork? what.ev.ar.
j
Very visceral . . .
I just re-read it.
Mmmph.
j
Any new or any news
Harsh and so physical--lots of imagery with this. Not sure I like it but dont think I am supose to.
I just droped by to see if u got any new
I hope u are okay
Hope to hear from u soon
nasra, thanks for stopping in. just a bit of a blogger roadblock. i'm sure i'll be back to my old self again soon.
write more... your writing is good and i want more more more .. ;-)
It's hard to be a Pavlovian dog.
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