Wednesday, August 17, 2005

Punish and reward me
like the dog you cannot
truly own.
I serve and deliver
hungry for seconds,
those gaps in time
that convince the
good side that there
is something worthy
of this love.
Devouring those seconds
between thought and action
where penetration meets
maximum insertion.

22 Comments:

Blogger DeCoMpOsEd said...

cool wordsmithing... haha i like that term

2:24 PM  
Blogger Lorena said...

wonderful flow and that feeling, such helplessness in it.

great poem. glad to see a new post :)

6:10 PM  
Blogger Jaxe said...

where penetration meets
maximum insertion.


WELCOME BACK!! ... wow! I can't stop reading that line *crinkles eyebrows* I'm not even going to tell you how I interpreted this one, my mind bends at times, D!

j

4:58 PM  
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5:42 PM  
Blogger gulnaz said...

Punish and reward me
like the dog you cannot
truly own.


excellent poem DeeM, good to see you back!

6:54 AM  
Blogger stella said...

just in case you didn't know, you've been dearly missed around here. so good to read your poems again!

1:23 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow we are on the circle in search of love

we can not own love
it own us as it seems...

Nasra

9:49 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

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9:50 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

well the above me...if you happen to wonder who is Nasra

9:52 AM  
Blogger Neel said...

Funny, I was going to comment on the same line as Jaxe, but he has pointed it out. I too am glad to see you back.

10:11 PM  
Blogger Jaxe said...

Deem's a dork! She's just basically a spam magnet. *blink* Uh oh, does that make us SPAM?

*cries*

<3

j

12:41 PM  
Blogger DeeM said...

If I'm a dork the that makes you dorks too. Birds of a feather...
At least I know nothing about D&D. ;)
Mmmm.... big fat hunky chunks of spam 'meat'. Who's hungry?

12:59 PM  
Blogger rhein said...

raw poetry.

2:37 PM  
Blogger Jaxe said...

*hands DeeM more spam*

"where penetration meets maximum insertion" Have at it with the spam!

(... and my L9 Chaotic Lawful Warrior/Rogue can kill you with ONE backstab, assuming you fail your saving throw) Dork? what.ev.ar.

j

2:22 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Very visceral . . .

11:20 PM  
Blogger Jaxe said...

I just re-read it.

Mmmph.

j

5:35 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Any new or any news

2:31 AM  
Blogger Pecos Blue said...

Harsh and so physical--lots of imagery with this. Not sure I like it but dont think I am supose to.

7:26 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

I just droped by to see if u got any new

I hope u are okay

Hope to hear from u soon

3:19 PM  
Blogger DeeM said...

nasra, thanks for stopping in. just a bit of a blogger roadblock. i'm sure i'll be back to my old self again soon.

12:51 AM  
Blogger DeCoMpOsEd said...

write more... your writing is good and i want more more more .. ;-)

12:28 PM  
Blogger sirbarrett said...

It's hard to be a Pavlovian dog.

1:07 PM  

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