Glance
Hear how I would
read this to you with my
soul and passion,
sadness and solemn.
Breaking here,
Breaking there...
Breaking down.
Before the final break,
I fear the end is near.
See me… inside?
Shooting from one
organ to another,
stabbing through.
Causing first, passion
then sadness and solemn.
Broken down,
broken through, to
the very end of
where I need to be
but yet, could never
see, the hearing you.
read this to you with my
soul and passion,
sadness and solemn.
Breaking here,
Breaking there...
Breaking down.
Before the final break,
I fear the end is near.
See me… inside?
Shooting from one
organ to another,
stabbing through.
Causing first, passion
then sadness and solemn.
Broken down,
broken through, to
the very end of
where I need to be
but yet, could never
see, the hearing you.
posted by DeeM at 10:20 PM
13 Comments:
i love the closing lines. i like the rhytmn of your poems always. i can really feel the emotion here and i can relate completely. glad to see you posting more frequently.
Hi Lorena! Many thanks, you are too kind!
DeeMer, such melancholy, yet biting imagery. I love the poem, although it makes me feel very sad. I agree with Lorena on the closing lines. Brilliant!
Ahh. This one hits close to home. Such a touching piece, DeeM.
No touching stella, remember? haha. Thanks! missed ya!
J, no crying either. and no freaking out! ESB.
Hello Deem!
Cutting, haunting. . . . it's nice to see you back writing again.
Also, since you are from New York, it is obligatory that you stop by my site and leave a comment on my latest post.
Bye!
Hi AP!
thank you much.
haha, consider it done! ;)
It is kind of nice to have missed reading your stuff for a while and get to read a bunch of it at once, all new and special. The different thoughts or topics in your mind mix together like some strange rainbow. Still beautiful.
Rock on!
Hey Rex! Thanks for giving me the lift I needed today.
Rockin' on!
are u some sort of famous poet? I could only say WOW!
Keshi.
Welcome Keshi, thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
I'm glad you like it.
Hi there, nice to hear from you thanks for dropping by I can't spell either, loved your poem glad you liked mine, drop by again soon
seems like all yanks r off on T-day hols..:)
Happy T-day to u too Deem!
Keshi.
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