liquid oozing out
of you into my inches
soothing my sores,
taking me over and
pasting to my skin
the essence of
your soul.
inside, vibrations
heat and intensify
shooting, at the speed
of sound from within
my core, surrounding
each of my organs
with a deep layer of
tingly denseness,
boiling them
so sublime.
of you into my inches
soothing my sores,
taking me over and
pasting to my skin
the essence of
your soul.
inside, vibrations
heat and intensify
shooting, at the speed
of sound from within
my core, surrounding
each of my organs
with a deep layer of
tingly denseness,
boiling them
so sublime.
17 Comments:
I like the graphic nature of this post. It is raw and intense.
phew!!!
hot!!!
:)
Yeah, wild !
Hi guys, thanks!
This was inspired by the sound of someone's voice.
Get your mind out of the gutter! ;)
lol, i have a filthy imagination, pardon me! :)
haha. Doesn't everyone, really? I most definitely do too.
so hot...my mind is still in the gutter ;)
wow i agree with all HOT :)
very fluid, i love it!
Is this FDA-approved? It sounds potent.
. . . "boling them to sublime." Now there is a phrase I haven't heard before. . . . Very creative . . . in an ominous sort of way.
Wow, I'm jealous of him! You are incredibly poetically descriptive.
Ok, I think I'm blushing. Intense.
Now I'm the one blushing. Yes, it's FDA approved and ready for mass marketing.
Don't be jealous neel!
Thanks all, for taking time to comment. You guys really inspire me. :)
Whew... between all the 'liquid' 'sore's , and 'boiling' , I thought I was back in the clinic after my bachelor party. Whew... *shudders*
No, seriously, very tasty. I really enjoy how you choose your words, always so ambiguous, leading us to a point where we have to interpret it with our own imaginations... Nice work Deem!
You rock, Jaxe. Many thanks!
Although, I'm not sure about that whole, ending up in the clinic after your bachelor party thing'. That could go many ways. ;)
Hehe, it turned out ok, nothing a few Hail Mary's, some penicillin, and new embryonic stem cells couldn't fix! Thanks for your concern though!
pretty cool poetry deem :)
jaxe, no problem. heh heh.
Josh, thanks for visiting, i'll be sure to check out your site. :)
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